Haiku - 37 Above Worries Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 37 Above Worries

Rating: 5.0


a lone bird flying
very high up in the sky
no shadow on earth

Haiku -  37 Above Worries
Sunday, March 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: haiku,life,philosophy
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 21 March 2016

Bliss! wish I could fly this high and vanish from this treacherous world. And for me high is in the terms of spirituality. beautiful Haiku Asim.10++++ for giving me the direction to fly all above the worries.

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Michael Jack 14 July 2020

From height you do not see others and you are free from worries. Great.

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Bri Edwards 12 January 2017

i like this much better than the first haiku i read today. i also like birds....a lot. both poems seems to follow what i think of as the general rule: 5-7-5. and deal with nature. i tend to take the poem literally. there is a bird high in the sky. no shadow is noticeable below. i don't need to try to philosophize about it to enjoy it; in fact i'd rather not philosophize! bri :)

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks Much Bri, I am happy that u liked it choice is yours how you wish to interpret....

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Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2016

when you are powerful and rich downtrodden and poor you cannot reach thanks Asim

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks much Loke.....

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Mihaela Pirjol 24 March 2016

This haiku feels like somehow is completing the previous poem I just read...the analogy between the bird and the human-soul...

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2016

Thank u so much MP.......)))

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 March 2016

With no shadow on earth. Nice work.

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M Asim Nehal 03 September 2018

Thanks Bro

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