Haiku 53 -Pride At Top Poem by Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

Haiku 53 -Pride At Top

Rating: 5.0


Earth struggling in thirst
Clouds above don't stop and rain
Pride at top is fun

Sunday, October 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: clouds,earth,fun,pride,rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
To those who are in the top the sufferings at lower level is a fun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 28 October 2020

Profound, and they shower where they are not required.5***

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Yes dear Asim., the despise of so called big people towards the simple needs of ordinary people is so arrogantly looked down upon

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 October 2020

An astute observation on people's character. A great metaphoriical write in just three lines. Nice imagery.

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Thank you very much for the comments dear RMJ. I have seen and perceived the despise big people feel against the sincere effoets of ordinary people even for meeting their both ends

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Aniruddha Pathak 25 October 2020

A Haiku that sets you thinking... on pride, right after I read one of Poet Costas Lagos....

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Thank you very much dear Pathakji. Top level pride with despise for those down is really abominable uncivic and unruly

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Kostas Lagos 18 October 2020

A haiku that needs to be read more than once. Really good!

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Thank you very much dear poet

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Thank you very much dear poet for the comments

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