Haiku - 67 Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 67

Rating: 5.0


thick dark clouds, above
a desperate bird flying
below, waves on waves

Haiku -  67
Sunday, June 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 June 2016

With the beauty of nature! ! ! Nice work.

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Kelly Kurt 19 June 2016

The perfect amount of words to describe the scene

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Savita Tyagi 19 June 2016

Great haiku. Loved the picture too.

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Ari Alsio 19 June 2016

I give this haiku 10+!

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