Haiku - 72 Smoke Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 72 Smoke

Rating: 5.0


penetrate my ears
the locomotive whistle
leaving clouds of smoke

Monday, June 27, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aarzoo Mehek 27 June 2016

I miss those age old locomotive engines... it's leaves a trail of memories, my childhood, those summer trips to grandparents house.. nice piece of work Asim.10

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Akhtar Jawad 27 June 2016

Smokes of locomotives are painful, a nice Haiku.

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Nosheen Irfan 27 June 2016

Wowww.121 haikus. Well done. Vivid images. I specially like the locomotive whistle. Its very apt auditory image.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 27 June 2016

Fortunate to have people sensitive enough to sensitize the society on some vagaries in day to day life, however much simple they may be. I enjoy yours. Thank you M.A.N. for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 June 2016

Going along with the ways of life around you. Nice work.

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