Haiku - 80 Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Haiku - 80 Life

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flying butterfly
sucks nectar mercilessly
a candle melting

Haiku - 80 Life
M. Asim Nehal
Monday, July 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: flower
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Darren Jkoeryo 28 December 2016

Wonderfully written, Man.10

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M Asim Nehal 12 March 2019

Thx Much D J....................

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Shreya Hacks 09 October 2020

Wow so welll thought

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Daniel Brick 04 July 2016

These are opposite metaphors of existence: the desperate activity of the butterfly contrasted to the resigned quiet melting of candle. The two categories of time are vividly differentiated.

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Darren Jkoeryo 04 July 2016

Great comparison with awesome metaphor, Life of a flower and a life of a candle......Short and sweet, sacrifice and pleasure, joy and happiness for others, Great poem MAN

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Rob Lamberton 12 March 2024

"Love is like a butterfly" - Dolly Parton

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 12 March 2024

I love the last line Asim Bravo! ! ! !

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 13 May 2021

Wow

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Michael Jack 31 December 2020

Awesome poem 😊

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Varsha M 29 December 2020

This is beautiful sir.

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