(These are some of my comments on the haikus of other poets at PH slightly altered where needed in order to let them stand alone.)
Cloud:
The cloud is in haste
It has to rain on the plains
Hot thirsty terrains
Peepholes:
Questions start with why
When, what and how – they all are
Peepholes that describe
In Orbit:
I remain unsent
Due to your gravity’s pull
Planet in orbit
Reality Of Life:
I don’t want to leave
But leave I must that is life
Sunshine, there is cloud
Carbon:
We are made of dust
Carbon therefore suits us best
Silicon can hurt
Pain:
Forgetful we are
Court pain again and again
‘Coz of ignorance
Tequila:
With salt on glass brim
Tequila is simply great
Hell with the liver
Sensitive Throats:
Even with hot drinks
Ice is pretty dangerous
Some sensitive throats
Water:
Two gases combine
A magic liquid is born
Blossoms of life bloom
Bread:
The bread is pretty
Send me a loaf fast pretty
Taste-buds are greedy
Ladybug (not a haiku) :
But why are they called bugs
When enchant is all they do
Unlike bugs and the lady of the house
Who bug us without a cease?
Poet (not a haiku) :
Tell me of what ethereal wine you are drunk
That so much poesy brims in your head
Like glowing glow-worms without a cease
Casting imagery day and night?
Fantastic haikus, among these I Like Pain, water, cloud and Lady bug most. Enjoyed. Thanks.
Wonderful haikus Reading 'em provides A lasting experience. Thank you for these beautiful verses which you call them as comments turned into haikus!
Beautiful compilation of verses sir. I am happy that you have made a compendium of those poetic verses...and not just comments. thanks for sharing sir...especially Water...for my haiku...thanks for your blessings sir.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful haikus...... Let me list my favourites! Cloud, Peepholes, Orbit, Water, Pain etc are excellent! Enjoyed the humour in Lady bug To rate Poet.....simply classic! Top marks!