Haiku - Forsaken Poem by Ruby Honeytip

Haiku - Forsaken

Rating: 4.5


Cold as an iced glass
Forgotten as a lover
Time to warm up Girl!

Sunday, November 4, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: forgotten,girl
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 03 July 2015

Both poignantly sad, yet light heartedly trying to move on. Nice one! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Stevie Taite 24 November 2012

Seventeen fit here Five seven five as should be and a lot was said! X x x

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Ruby Honeytip 04 November 2012

Hard Ten would suffice.

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