I have no problem understanding
The concept of being numberless to you,
You can forget me,
But I'm still around.
I did not disappear
From the world you filled
The same giggle
The same remorse.
I have not changed
From the day you thought
You are gone.
I loved it, very smooth and go line by line like there's no way to stop me from feel it! great! _Soul
Very poignant, and cleverly written poem - you make the point well.
I hope in times to come you will get to meet your friend soon.Splendid write so touching!
LOVE this one. Get out of my head. Or stay, because that's what good writers do. Express relatable thoughts very well. Thanks for sharing. I did not disappear From the world you filled For me. I have not changed From the day you thought Me perfect. Those are my favorite lines.
Loved the way you talked about the separation, the fruitless longing….
Passions boil... passions cool... good expression, though sad... Terry
In a few lines, you have depicted the unexpected cooling down of a warm relationship! Your stoic acceptance of it makes the poem specially charming! Thanks for this great share! !
I loved this fantastic poem and can relate to it perfectly right at the moment...unfortunately.....but, as we know, life goes on, and we do too. Thanks for putting my emotions into words here. Excellent!
nice poem..ladden with emotions
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
No matter whar young Ruby.. your writing is perfect... flawless... thankyou