David Beckham

Rookie - 72 Points (Madrid, Spain)

Haiku - Morality - Poem by David Beckham

Our morality
Erodes like the shorelines
When in wickedness we live


Comments about Haiku - Morality by David Beckham

  • (8/19/2011 3:22:00 AM)


    I don't know if it fits in the mold of a haiku, but I liked it very much... (Report) Reply

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  • (8/14/2010 11:38:00 AM)


    A well thought out haiku. Good job! (Report) Reply

  • (8/14/2010 10:19:00 AM)


    Thanks. Bittersweet, short and to the point. I like it very well. (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2010 10:45:00 PM)


    Not big on Haiku but very well written.I like the way you write again. (Report) Reply

  • (8/13/2010 7:03:00 PM)


    Very short but beautifully said. Nice Haiku and a good write. Lynn (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 13, 2010



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