Haiku … Summertime Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Haiku … Summertime

Rating: 5.0


Bright pink candy floss
The fun of the fairground rides
Those days of our youth.


Jayne Louise Davies

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 18 April 2023

You took me back to those days of my youth Jayne

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

Nostalgia is a wonderful thing LeeAnn : ) Glad you liked it x

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Dr Dillip K Swain 17 April 2023

A beautiful haiku dear poetess...loved it. Top score!

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

Thank you Dillip! I appreciate your kind comments x

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D.N. Rebb 17 April 2023

I don't know which is more nostalgic, cotton candy or small town midway rides. I miss them both

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Jayne Louise Davies 18 April 2023

There is nothing so grand as the sounds of the fairground as a child : ) Best days!

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Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff
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