Haiku...Tongue Twister Poem by Ken e Hall

Haiku...Tongue Twister

Rating: 5.0


The frog still with a
Silent stare, beware it thinks
You are a big fly

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 December 2013

Beautiful Tongue twister...Good imagination.

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Hans Vr 24 November 2013

great imagination wonderfully expressed in this excellent haiku

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 13 November 2013

flirt tongue twister an illusion a mirage to put ones in trouble lovely thank sir God bless you

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Allemagne Roßmann 12 November 2013

A frog still is a winner.We abuse and in labs so long misused them- - and when it comes to twist our tongues- - - we loose our mother tongue- - when we dream to twist the tongue the French way for our beloved we feel shy even if the one wanting it is a French fly. Great write Sir.Timeless Haiku.Frogs have a very high Japanese personification and animation industry in Japan does have special affinity for frogs.I do not come here that often though.I hibernate also nowhere else.A froggy salute to you Sir until back with another frogtale monsoon between the winter summer cocktail.And wishing you a good health and spirit in Oceania- an area missing my rosters for years.

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Kanav Justa 05 November 2013

.. liked the way you conncted the title with the haiku... amazing

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Ken e Hall

Ken e Hall

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