Haiku Two: Better Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

Haiku Two: Better

Rating: 5.0


degraded to three
your neck still above waters
you'll never be drowned

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
IF one stays on lowest level, he cannot go lower, ah, this not only GOOD, but BETTER.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Freeyad Hugo 08 January 2022

It is really a mystery...you are higher than NO 3--I protest!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 January 2022

Thank you for your great support. Allah's Great Blessings

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Interesting Haiku. I wonder how human nature accepts being on the lowest level?

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Sylvia Frances Chan 09 January 2022

Of course human nature always accepts being on the lowest level IF he/she deserves, BUT if that is the wrong place, WHO decides? Thank you for your caring response, dear David

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Sylvia Frances Chan

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Jakarta, Indonesia
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