Haiku03 By Nr Poem by Jagdish Singh Ramana

Haiku03 By Nr

Rating: 4.3


Thou and me
Deep in spell nature
Like lotos.

Monday, January 14, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
From the sequence of NR'S Haikus.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prabir Gayen 14 January 2019

Fine haiku dear poet..........

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Akhtar Jawad 18 January 2019

Love is life and life is love. A nice thought beautifully penned.

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Dr Antony Theodore 21 January 2019

the Spell of the nature Depth Lotus...……… very fine Haiku dear Poet.. thank u. tony

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 21 January 2019

note: loto; Tennyson's 'Lotos Eaters'.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2022

A lovely haiku.....loved reading it. Top score!

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Mahtab Bangalee 17 December 2019

everyone spelled each by other we're in life

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Rajnish Manga 29 March 2019

An observation relating to nature beautifully captured in words. Thank you, Jagdish.

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Manpreet Singh 21 March 2019

Well its nice but u know a haiku is supposed to have 17 syllables. 5 - 7 - 5

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Thank you! An alternate of 3-5-3=11 syllables.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 March 2019

A wonderful haiku. It captures the magical powers of nature in everything.

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