O, Happy flower, Hibiscus!
I noticed you, the morn
Beaming bright and bathed in snow
How charming you there shone
Muttering with the tender wind
You were dancing there- all smiles
I now find you spent and pale-
The midday sun- went wild?
Who withdrew the hue in you?
The One that brought you here-
The One that made you bloom here-
The One that gave grandeur-
Goodbye, dear Hibiscus,
You have made my day!
I won't find your smile this way
On your stem the next day
16th Jan 2020
I noticed you at dawn! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Drizzling snow on hibiscus makes it bloom bright. Splendid beauty is a welcoming scene to capture the hearts of us!
Hibiscus is my favorite flower. The native and the hybrid both. Thanks for your nice words
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very lovely poem. Liked how this poem was crafted. An interaction between man and nature. An astute observation on the wonders of Mother Nature. Beautifully written.