Happy Independence Day 2013 Poem by M D Dinesh Nair

Happy Independence Day 2013

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A memory bounces back
And two nations celebrate again
Their hard obtained Independence.

A nation divided for no good reason
Remains in our minds recoiling
From the long lost glory of oneness.

Even as the British regime lost no battle
We believe a Gandhi and a Jinnah won their goal
Of a liberation that we dreamed to be ours for ever.

66 years since the RED LETTER DAY descended on us!
Kashmir still burns down through our nerves,
And poverty still rules over our small villages,

Two doves must be released over the divided skies
And two notions of love and brotherhood must move them together
To make the fanatics in them melt down here and there.

What if the Sunnies and the Shias shed tears for each other
And their sons and daughters make their matrimony mutual?
What if a machinery that is on par with the judiciary emerges there?

What if a masjid and a shrine stand together here
And an Allah and a Ram stand outside to guard them?
What if the majority protects the minority here and there?

And what if a smile is planted on the face of each Malala
Whom we see here and there amidst the throngs?
What if we stand together and laugh together?

We have to travel a lot on these tracks
Laid and closed now and then by our men at the helm
And beyond the iron curtain we have to see each other.

On this 67th Independence Day
I salute our heroes who toiled and died
For all our independence in kind and form.

May we close our eyes and pray to ourselves?
'Make our nations come closer and closer still
And then open a heaven on the earth for us all'.

A VERY VERY HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY TO ALL OF YOU

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Pakistan and India got Independence from the British Regime on the 14th/15th of August 1947.Both these Nations were divided on the religious grounds.The political freedom obtained changed the nations a lot. But... These two great nations have achieved some of their goals. But...
In this context I have penned down these lines.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shahzia Batool 13 August 2013

Happy independence day to you too....these lines also reveal that we all need a peaceful happy life with progress and prosperity, a dream...what if skies deliver a threatening look, we the common people need to keep our eyes open, and stay away from any evil thing...we all need peace...thank you for the poem...and the kind comments...

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Aswath Raman 13 August 2013

Wise words sir. But are you happy with the freedom that exist today in our country? Do you think we are free? If not by law and lislation but by consumerism and capitalism, we are still ruled. Happy independence day to you too, and hoping we can change a bit more to betterment what our leaders dreamt of our nation becoming.

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Ramesh Rai 13 August 2013

india pakistan bangladesh breathe together. their life style is same same feelings but it is a pity we are divided into pieces. problem of kashmir is another issue. how long the naked dance of religion will be going on. i love this poem n include in my list. freedom fighters were only patriot loved the soil sacrificed their life did never think for this day.thnx for sharing

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 13 August 2013

Happy Independence Day Dinesh. Let us have another day of flag hoisting and the distribution of Indian sweets..

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Tajudeen Shah 28 August 2013

Hello, Dear Dinesh Nair, I am sorry, no one has reviewed your independence day versification after my regards to you. Please check why. great regards and love taj shah

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Tajudeen Shah 14 August 2013

Ah, Dear DineshJi, Wish you and Salute you. I wonder, rather excited to see your reflections. You have left nothing unnoticed, instead gathered all those past and present hard facts of a DREAM-NATION, its souls, their thought waves, laments, misgivings, hopes and earnest desires to be ONE to enjoy the nature-destined equality and securities; an absolute Oneness that might carry the whole humanity into heavenly heights on chariots of fraternity and Fakhr. (Pride) A wonderful verse that comprises, rather proclaims the soul-vibes of millions of Indians and Pakistanis. An elite dissection over the lands and minds. Wish you remain bathed in the glory of the most enduring literary nimbus for ever more. Cheers. Independence would become a reality with souls like these.

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Unwritten Soul 14 August 2013

Marching my words in a straight line to give an honor, Happy Independence day India_Soul

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Dinesan Madathil 14 August 2013

Aswath, I am just greeting and shari ng a few concerns.There is no happiness over any aspect and let us bury our heads in the sand for a show.

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Valsa George 13 August 2013

A series of thoughts cast before us on the eve of Independence day...! ! ! .And what if a smile is planted on the face of each Malala Whom we see here and there amidst the throngs? What if we stand together and laugh together? We have to travel a lot on these tracks... so true... Flight is what is longed for by every caged bird and we exult that we are free! ! But what freedom is this when we are still manacled by the shackles of want and misery, fear and terror, intolerance and bigotry? ? Can we ever aspire for the two warring nations to be one... Let us be hopeful! ! Very powerful write Dinesh! Happy Indedependence day! !

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