Hard To Gulp Poem by Pallavi Tripathi

Hard To Gulp

Rating: 4.9

I stared at phone for umpteenth time
Just to see if you've seen my messages. Wind chime
Remind me of your presence
Of our time together, now your absence,
Which like this poem
Is hard to gulp, lost rhythm.


Rhythm of life gets lost in separation from the loved one. Good poem

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 March 2023

I feel the same way about my friends

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 March 2023

This is a wonderful poem dear Pallavi. Keep it up!

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Denis Mair 06 April 2023

The beauty of wind chimes is that intervals between notes convey the wind's mood, even though there is no rhythm.

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Denis Mair 06 April 2023

It is wonderful to say that the wind chimes remind you of time together with someone, but also someone's absence. This conveys the sweet confusion of love: the future of the relationship is still up in the air.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 23 March 2023

My pleasure revisiting this wonderful poem! Nicely penned! !

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Richard Wlodarski 08 March 2023

These moments can be so frustrating and painful. May your poem be a cathartic release for you. Failing that, call (not text) him from another phone number. Wishing you a positive outcome, Pallavi!

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Pallavi Tripathi 09 March 2023

Thank you Richard! Will definitely take your advice.

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Anjandev Roy 07 March 2023

Excellent piece.......thanks for sharing....

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