Harmony Ii (The Fourth True Love) Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Harmony Ii (The Fourth True Love)

Rating: 4.5


Yes, it shall be remembered,
Long after we are gone;
How much I loved her truly,
Till we were called upon.

Called upon to leave this world
Of doomed love now and then.
Bound for certain destinies,
Perhaps, to meet again.

If it's true, then in your time,
While you are here below;
The truth of love eternal,
Both she and I will know.

So here's a clue to guide you,
To love beyond your days.
The truth is, love eternal;
Is formed in many ways.

The first, is just by friendship.
The second, joys unbound.
The third, is inner beauty;
The one that I had found.

There is a fourth to cherish,
Though it's quite rare you see.
The one that's formed in Heaven.
The one called, Harmony.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Scarlett Treat 07 May 2008

Great recipe for what I would call 'abiding' love.....not just the instant attraction, but love that last...forever and always?

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Tsira Goge 07 May 2008

'The one that's formed in Heaven.' ................................................. I have read this the second time, and I wish to tell that really fine poems and your internal harmony is felt. .! 0..... Tsira

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Ernestine Northover 08 May 2008

Very nice Greenwolfe, peace, balance, harmony that is what we all need. Lovely ending to this write. A delight to read. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Jerry Hughes 10 May 2008

Wolfe, as a confirmed agnostic I dispute the concept of heaven - using it as a metaphor I go along with. In context nicely put my friend...

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Jesse Bauer 13 May 2008

Very good flow to this poem. Excellent use of words, good rhyming, good rhythm and a fantastic point to it. Great job with this one, very much enjoyed reading it.

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Cristy Upshaw 29 May 2009

bravo, hun, very endearing and enlightening piece. so enjoyed.

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Mamta Agarwal 01 April 2009

lovely composition. one needs to be in harmony to discover the first three...is what i see fascinating, mamta

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C. P. Sharma 11 February 2009

I agree with James, really a Hall of Fame poem. So much said in so simple soul searching words. CP

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Norman Hale 05 July 2008

awesome writing here as well as many others that I've read of yours this happens to be the first one I could comment on lol keep'em comin

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Rhiannon Scase 02 July 2008

Another fantastic write! Keep up the good the work, I think your astounding! Rhiannon*

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