Harsh Winter(Haiku) Poem by koyel mitra

Harsh Winter(Haiku)

Rating: 4.8


Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.

Landscape draped with snow
Rose petals stripped of beauty
Chilly thoughts rain hard.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

the beauty about something harsh is expressed so splendidly with the economy of word and the soul of a HAIKU keep it up!

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Tanya Stanford 22 September 2008

Absolutely brilliant way to express winter. Loved it.

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 September 2008

a perfect delineation of how weather affects ones moods.....with fog upon the horizon thoughts too are grey...good job!

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Deepti Agarwal 18 September 2008

i always like Haiku's as with such less words so much is said.... u did a perfect job here... when time permit read my 'Shades of Nature' its kind of haiku....

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Nathaniel Booker 15 September 2008

Even though I'm not a haiku writer, I love them and everytime I read one as descriptive in so very few words as this, I am reminded over again why they are such powerful pieces. ***10*** Be Well

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<font color=black>Nagourta 13 November 2008

That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?

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Rakhi Jayashankar 04 October 2008

i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10

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Mamta Agarwal 30 September 2008

lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10

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Indira Babbellapati 28 September 2008

.........................good show, young lady!

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Ivor Hogg 26 September 2008

It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it

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