Morn sky caked with smog
Sun concealed in misty lair
Foggy thoughts in mind.
Landscape draped with snow
Rose petals stripped of beauty
Chilly thoughts rain hard.
a perfect delineation of how weather affects ones moods.....with fog upon the horizon thoughts too are grey...good job!
i always like Haiku's as with such less words so much is said.... u did a perfect job here... when time permit read my 'Shades of Nature' its kind of haiku....
Even though I'm not a haiku writer, I love them and everytime I read one as descriptive in so very few words as this, I am reminded over again why they are such powerful pieces. ***10*** Be Well
That sounds so pleasant! Why then is harsh in the title?
i personnaly believ that its very difficult to write a haiku well depicted beauty of wnter morning 10
lovely- you have captured well the grim harsh winter inner and outer landscape.10
It is small world An indian lady writing japanesse forms in english and makinga fine job of it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
the beauty about something harsh is expressed so splendidly with the economy of word and the soul of a HAIKU keep it up!