Has Fate Forgotten? Poem by Argentine Tango

Has Fate Forgotten?

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Has fate forgotten?
Has that unspoken promise
forgotten to shake hands with time?
Its perspicacious presence
seems to have eluded yet another moment
that had the potential of being so lucid.
So questions follow,
hovering in between us
like a breath on a winter morning,
skipping between our words
and burning holes in our palms
when clasped together.
Now, should fate bless us with certainty
and peace of mind by making an appearance,
would we even accept what it has to offer?
Will the alliance be broken?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
East Sea Fairy East Sea Fairy 08 September 2013

a wonderful poem with fitanstic imago

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Suman Kumar Das 06 November 2013

Hi Argentine Tango, So beautifully worded & great thought! Thank You Regards, Suman

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Khairul Ahsan 24 September 2013

'So questions follow, hovering in between us like a breath on a winter morning, skipping between our words and burning holes in our palms ' Great expression! Liked it.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 15 September 2013

Anxiety well expressed.Psalms can hold palms well.

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Jonathan H. Scott 12 September 2013

Thought provoking. Thanks for sharing..

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Abhishek Mishra 10 September 2013

Very nice poem ma'm.. Loved it: -)

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