He Relied On His Sense Of Touch Poem by Sandra Martyres

He Relied On His Sense Of Touch

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He relied on his sense of touch
Without having to say much
Randy was a young blind child
Brought up almost in the wild
Surrounded by illiterate lads
Who looked and behaved like little cads
Yet he was always very mild
A very gentle and well mannered child
Walking and feeling his way around
Which did everyone astound?
People would keep watching in awe
As he ambled towards the door
He did not trip
He did not fall
Nor did he for any help Call
He had no white cane
He simply used his alert brain
Then came his real test
He had to go to school like the rest
No teachers wanted him in their class
They feared he would never pass
If he from birth could not see
How would he even imagine a tree
Or learn the alphabets
He would be a drag on the other children
But the world is not short of good Samaritans
One came forward like an Aladdin
He led the boy to a distant cave
And with clay models and Braille
To him the required knowledge gave
Soon he gained enough confidence.
In his mentor’s loving care
he was able to shed his diffidence
He went back and joined school
Today he is looked upon by all
as a model child who answered his call
One who gives to hope
to all physically challenged children
That even in this tough and cruel world
Given a chance they will be able to cope.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 09 May 2009

a sensitive and touching subject... apoem well done...thanx for reminding us of our blessings that we take for naught... and also sensitising us to the needs of every day people aroud us superb write...a tenner cheers

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Carol Gall 08 May 2009

a story of wonder and hope thanks

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Fiona Davidson 08 May 2009

A heartwarming story of just what we can overcome if we are given the chance Sandra...this made me smile...your talent with words wins through yet again...Fi 10+++

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Alison Cassidy 05 May 2009

A true life story that demonstrates the importance of communication in a challenging world. Your plucky little boy had the intelligence and good sense to have a go. Fortunately for him, a 'good samaritan' arrived at just the right moment and turned this story into a 'happily ever after' one. Inspiring words delivered with a keen ear for rhyme. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Rajkumar Mukherjee 04 May 2009

Dear Sandra, As I said earlier you have got a variable choice of subjects where your love & passion for the under-priviledged flows freely..Your descript and choice of words are appropriate but a bit lengthy.But all our sympathies run for those, 'That even in this tough and cruel world Given a chance they will be able to cope' and they are surviving. Thanks for sharing. -Rajkumar

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Patti Masterman 18 October 2009

You have such empathy and kindness. I bet there is not much gets by your notice, is there? Wonderful story and made me so happy at the outcome. When people really do care, there are often happy endings, I believe.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 13 May 2009

Verry touching poem...Your concern is appreciated...Life is struggle as it is here it is much more thann that good poem

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Naidz Ladia 11 May 2009

my gosh, this is really a great work dear..you put well in words the physical appearance, the behavior and his alertness in a poem..incouragement is present here, intelligence too and maybe the support from his guardians..a very smart poem dear..i like this one..i'll include this in my fav..naizz

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Subroto Chatterjee 10 May 2009

That's very well written. Brought a lump in the throat, it did. Cheers. Subroto

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rago rago 10 May 2009

concern and helping nature to the differently abled person really well woven in this poem........fantastic write.......

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