Healing Hearts- Imagery Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Healing Hearts- Imagery

Rating: 4.9


We walked alongside one another
and did not talk
Went past a pond filled with lotus
and saw the swimming ducks
We did not stop to discuss anything
and reached our pine tree
collected fallen pines
and put them straight in a row
sat for a while looking at the sky
heavy clouds gathered
and it started raining
instead of looking for shed
we allowed water to fall on our body
and wipe our past
the scars which I felt in my heart
started to heal by the song of the rain.

Friday, February 15, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 15 February 2019

A lovely romantic poem!

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Michael Jack 03 August 2020

SO WELL THOUGH ABOUT SILENT LOVE..

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T Rajan Evol 27 July 2020

Awesome poem, Asim. liked it thumbs up.

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Mihaela Pirjol 20 February 2019

Sometimes, we find a poem, like this one; and, you wonder (as a reader) : How is it possible to read a poem which directly speaks to your heart? You ponder, and then you realise that Love is universal! I wish I wrote this poem!

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Mihaela Pirjol 18 February 2019

This poem melts your heart! There is so much clarity of emotion described, which usually is not very easy to find words for such refined subtlety of heart; but, you, as always, feel how a human heart feels. What you have described in this poem, I have felt, and know what this love is. Thank you, my dear, for this poem.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 15 February 2019

a beautiful imagery.Feel it.10

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