Her Comfort. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Her Comfort.

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Day and night seems to have merged,
Weak with desire I sank into her arms.

The touch of Senorita’s smooth skin,
felt like ice on my scorched skin.

I was delirious like insane Spanish bull,
whispering strange meaningless words to her.

My face resting in the curve of her neck and,
her strong comforting arms wrapped around me like a blanket.

It was uncanny how easily I melted and,
morphed into her skin and became her.

Our relationship was something between friendship and love,
something which I had not experienced in real life.

The comfort I felt by being with her,
Was like fluid with no spaces in-between.

Tuesday, September 29, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kinyua Karanja 01 October 2015

Awesome piece, nicely expressed romantic theme, lovely couplet poem.

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Ramesh T A 30 September 2015

Most sensuous feeling exposed as it is!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 September 2015

Romantic expression. So nicely presented. Lovely poem of love. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 30 September 2015

Her strong comforting arms! With the muse of the romance of her love. Nice piece.

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2015

Thank u sir....

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Sanjukta Nag 30 September 2015

nice fragrance of spain is spilling from this crimson flower of love. lovely lovely and lovely.

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M Asim Nehal 01 October 2015

Thank u SN....

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