a mind, when it meets desire
it does, what water does to a fire
and a heart, when it meets the same
is a kerosene to a flame
oh, lucky me. i already read and commented. yay! bri ;) now to place it into Section A of November's showcase. see if you can find it there shortly.
there certainly is some truth to this poem, which you undoubtedly spent hours or days composing, despite your new job! but some fires are not extinguished by water! [think: electrical and oil i think] look at the fire extinguisher's labeling! a mix of heart and mind is better to use to deal with desires, i think. especially if the result of 'following your heart' is a not-so-great marriage, an unwanted baby, or an obese body (due to overeating/drinking) . :) :) bri
Wonderful thought in this beautiful poem, a fine work! and also prove my mind :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautiful words of true love that greet many at least once in life.