we speak of the splendor of the flowers when they wither
in spring there are too many of them for us to praise
a day when the sun shall seize to shine
we will speak of its warm tender rays
we might learn to live, with no sun overhead
and make own our sun, that gives its flame
the things would change, in time to come
our hearts no longer would beat the same
no singing birds, might then be heard
all mountains tall, might one day fall
the flowing rivers, one day would dry
our gleeful heart someday would sigh
embrace the seas, the blowing wind
embrace the birds that gaily sing
embrace the glory of the rising sun
things might change in time to come
You have always dazzled me with your poems kanav...every time i read your poems, my idea about the beauty that could be maintained while composing poetry increases...its like, see his poems, see how beautifull they are, why not imagine beauty to that level, why not? Give it a try. Learning much from you kanav. Thanks.
Enjoy while they are all there. Beautiful poem. Thank you.
A powerful and beautifully written poem. Great write Kanav!
A fantastic poem with exhortation to apreciate the present and life's gifts before they disapear. Futuristic tinges imagined swell and in a learned way here
we might learn to live, with no sun overhead and make own our sun, that gives its flame the things would change, in time to come our hearts no longer would beat the same---A great poem.
embrace the seas, the blowing wind embrace the birds that gaily sing embrace the glory of the rising sun things might change in time to come........ embracing beauty is a great vision... you are a visionary, a poet of beauty. thank you for all the beautiful stanzas of your poem. thank you. tony
Pat Northall. A wonderfully written poem, embracing all natures gifts given to us... but such a tender, but urgent wake up call to cherish, and love, for very soon they could disappear without our trace. How cold a place our life would be without them. I wish I could write so well. Thank you.
Embrace this glorious universe, before it might be to late. An uplifting, inspired beauty of a poem The ending is tremendous and maybe symbolic of things to come-a great write 10
The great beauty that is this world with nature as the star attraction in this brilliant poem that is full of your love for life that shines so bright!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
Amazing write Kanav.... Beautiful lines...... we might learn to live, with no sun overhead and make own our sun, that gives its flame.... Humorous lines, but they mean a lot.... Very true said, We create our own moon, sun, anger, pain and everything. We wait for everything to wither away then we will start repainting it especially when we feel. Very true said, we don't embrace the beauty that comes in our way......We wait for next season to enjoy, and forget to enjoy with what we are going with...In all sense it means to enjoy with whats going on... Really Loved reading this thoughtful poem....