Heart Burns Poem by Rini Shibu

Heart Burns

Rating: 4.9


Walk around
This world round
You are found
In nature's sound

You wish to stay
a little away
The nature plays
to bring you on her way

Is it love
Or a gift from above
But heart burns of
As if in oven or stove

Sunday, August 19, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: amazing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aqua Flower 19 August 2018

Love this little piece of poetry! Heart can burn for many things. The rhyming is superb!

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Lamar Cole 19 August 2018

This is a very good poem about heart burns.

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Valsa George 21 August 2018

Nature can relieve one of this heart burn, but it can also cause heart burn as it is in Kerala at present!

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Mahtab Bangalee 20 August 2018

Neutron understands bomb but human understands heart with love /// good writing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

You wish to stay a little away The nature plays to bring you on her way.......pragmatic expression! A beautiful poem! (10)

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 August 2018

Hi Rini, It is revelation that Nature plays to bring you on her way..... very beautifully expressed

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2018

Love makes heart burns sometimes. You have incisively portrayed this lovely poem. Thank u.10

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