Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

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Heart Of The Sea - Poem by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

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Atmosphere full of fear
Hard to feel the heat of tear
Heart of the sea turns into steel
That dream is only so real

I Iaid my pencil down
Can't bear no more sound
I only sold the dawn
To gain for you a star

The story teller's eyes
Faked one more tale
About a diary full of lies
Shield me from myself

A nightingale singing the old ballad
A mother entwining her daughter's hair
The father is out teaching his son
How to obey the lord's willing

My life became miserable since I
Started to dream of the butterfly's wings
You've been pulled to the flames
As long as I lived wishing for this moment

This is me breathing what your wings blow to me
Nothing will turn the air pure again since you flew
Into the dark I found myself waiting for you
I'm not an eager seeker i'm just waiting for you


Comments about Heart Of The Sea by Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

  • (1/12/2010 1:24:00 PM)


    it's very musical that's what i liked the most....nicely written...thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • (1/12/2010 5:54:00 AM)


    Nice write
    enjoyable read
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  • (1/12/2010 5:50:00 AM)


    Splendid poem! I loved it specially the first stanza, , , Good Work!
    10++
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  • Naseer Ahmed Nasir (1/12/2010 2:26:00 AM)


    This is really a good poem, Hassan, perfectly reflects the title. Imagery is another feature of this beautiful poem. Keep up the good work.
    Best wishes.

    Naseer
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  • (1/11/2010 8:42:00 PM)


    A dream. Conducted in the Heart of The Sea. Good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (1/11/2010 7:35:00 PM)


    Excellent, brother, what a masterpiece, very deep and meaningful, I really understand what you are saying, from the bottom of my heart, since I speak your language...Great poem, you clearly got your message across...Keep it up! 10+++++(Sorry, brother, I have been having problems with the site when it comes to rating, I try and try, many times, but it won't go through...) Love and Peace, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2010 6:39:00 PM)


    This is amazing. Good Job! (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2010 6:16:00 PM)


    owww...this is so nice espeially the last part..cheers.. (Report) Reply

  • (1/11/2010 6:13:00 PM)


    Started to dream of the butterfly's wings

    nice confessional poem belonging to lyrism

    10/10
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 11, 2010



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