My heart's feeling could be summed up,
When I was startled by your arrogance,
I sensed new doors would be opened up,
My voice sounded steady by your defiance.
Time, place were stopped but my heart awakens up,
I was euphoric, enjoying your presence,
I had built everything in love but you split up,
My hope erred, changing your place.
I was accustomed to battle but my heart was broken up,
I was a warrior but your weapon was sharped in advance,
You evoked my romantic past but my mind was given up,
Fighting I've lost but my whole is still fitted in your glance.
Time and place may be stopped but heart awakens up. Every beat of heart tells about love and life interestingly. Summing up heart's feeling is interesting. An amazing poem is shared here is wisely penned....10
Thank you so much Mr. MAHAKUL for reading, I really appreciate your review.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Arrogance and defiance- -weapons that can jar a man off his romantic feet. I'm glad you wrote this so straight from the heart or shoulder if you wish. Women don't often get a peek at the inner thoughts of a man- and I must admit a little surprise and a liking for the thoughts herein described. Time, place were stopped but my heart awakens up, I was euphoric, enjoying your presence, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - but these were followed by acceptance of defeat I was accustomed to battle but my heart was broken up, I was a warrior but your weapon was sharped in advance, You evoked my romantic past but my mind was given up, Fighting I've lost but my whole is still fitted in your glance. - - - - - - - - - - - - I thank you for a look into the thoughts of a man who bends to the will of a woman with no hard feelings. Well-done. and a most intriguing topic!
Thank you Susan Williams for your amazing review. It's feeling of happiness and fear when we met our Soul mate.
Thank you for reading. I'm glad reading your amazing review.
Thank you for reading. I'm glad reading your amazing view.