Crimson Love

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Heartbeat - Poem by Crimson Love

Gentle is the heartbeat I've never known,
humming in sync with the Crimson that flows,
The sweetest lullaby, the envy of all melodies,
Such a faint whisper, Only I am able to hear,
This love dreched part, thought untouchable....
Yet I've touched it...

Inseperable from the body, yet so easily given,
One faint heartbeat on the brink of love,
falls into regret, the beating shall stop,
love is beautiful..... but what it does is not.


Comments about Heartbeat by Crimson Love

  • (11/21/2011 12:11:00 PM)

    'falls into regret, the beating shall stop,
    love is beautiful..... but what it does is not.'

    I am touched by your poem. I think this poem has the depth of the Indian Ocean. I am Proud of your work being a fellow poet!

    Carry with your poetry in the same passion and style. A garland to you (if only you write many poems like this) ...Ha! HA! Ha! :) :) :)
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  • (11/20/2011 2:40:00 PM)

    Really like this. Really good poem. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 20, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, November 21, 2011


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