Heat Of Passion Poem by Rini Shibu

Heat Of Passion

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When passion heats up
and you don't open up
A kind of distance
that builds up
You are shattered
and don't feel free
Is it lack of trust or love
Love without trust
Isn't love at all
if your love is pure
just put your trust
Trust opens the heart
And draws you close
You are secure
in his hands more

Sunday, December 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love,passion,trust
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2017

With a kind distance of trust and love passion becomes lovely to revive love within life. An amazing sharing is done here.10

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Robert Murray Smith 11 May 2018

Trust underlines love as passion flows like a river of gold.+++10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 11 December 2017

Trust opens the heart And draws you close You are secure in his hands more Trust, the building block of long lasting love, the cementing factor of conjugal bond. Thanks dear for writing so brilliant these days, every time brighter. 10+++++ Subhas

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Subhas, thrust is building block

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Saravanan Sivasubramanian 11 December 2017

Trust opens the heart And draws you close You are secure in his hands more Dear poet, you are correct. trust only saves love and mankind

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Thanks Siva for your comment

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Nudershada Cabanes 11 December 2017

Passion needs outlet for release.when passion heats up it would burst into flames.

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Rini Shibu 11 December 2017

Yes passion burst into flames.. Thanks Nuder

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Unnikrishnan E S 10 December 2017

Hi Rini, Passion makes one blind. In Sanskrit, there is a word: : : Kopandha: : , meaning blind with anger: : So, it is always recommended to avoid anger. It is not just anger, passion of any nature has the same effect. Great, Rini..

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Rini Shibu 10 December 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan for your comment

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