Heaven Is Hell Poem by Cosmic Dreamer

Heaven Is Hell

Rating: 5.0


As I walk down a golden paved highway,
The sound of angels song fills my ears,
I dance amidst the couds that surround me,
A vision of paradise stretches out before me,
I breathe in life from all of my surroundings,
I have died and become an immortal,
Golden haloed angels have become my company,
Blooms of lush flowers and birdsong surround,
And in this paradise I search for you my love,
I call out your name, yet you do not answer,
My past lifes lived must have been sinful indeed,
Where my crimes against humanity so unspeakable?
What sins must I have committed to deserve this?
For I have searched this never ending paradise,
And now I know heaven is hell... For you are not here...

Spread the love... The peace will follow...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 18 December 2011

If love is here in this earth, 'twill also be a paradise! ! ! I love this poem! ! !

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Dave Walker 16 December 2011

Loved it. A great poem.

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Silentpoet Grl 16 December 2011

Amazing! Love your imagery! Really a beautiful poem! Every line is truly immaculate!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 13 October 2015

Verily, a lovely description........10

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Kim Barney 19 January 2015

A hauntingly beautiful poem, but you meant to say WERE MY CRIMES, not WHERE MY CRIMES.

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Amitava Sur 05 September 2014

A beautiful poem describing the intense longing for beloved with a lovely vision of love and peace. Thanks for sharing this.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 26 December 2011

Great poem, i enjoyed reading it.

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Crimson Love 25 December 2011

I dance amidst the couds that surround me, A vision of paradise stretches out before me, I breathe in life from all of my surroundings, I have died and become an immortal, Truly a phenomenal poem.

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