Heavenly Home Poem by Jayne Louise Davies

Heavenly Home

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The sky such a delicate shade of red,
A crow calls above as he flies overhead,
The silence around me,
Is soothing somehow,
I think of you always,
I think of you now,
My thoughts, never stop turning
Around and around,
I'm longing to know,
That you're safe and sound,
I'm missing you so,
And I need you today,
But there's nothing,
That i can do or say,
For the angels have taken you,
To their beautiful home,
And heaven does not have a telephone,
My longing to see you,
To hear you once more,
Is driving me mad,
For I need you so,
Wherever you are,
Just think of me,
For I'll think of you through eternity.



Jayne Louise Davies

Tuesday, November 29, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,soothing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 30 November 2022

Nice reflection of eternal love, platonic in nature.

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Richard Wlodarski 30 November 2022

This form of communication needs no telephone. A loving write, Jayne!

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Jayne Louise Davies 01 December 2022

Thank you all x I'm so greatful for your kind comments x

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David Wood 29 November 2022

Heaven does not have a telephone, very good line, but has it been disconnected from above?

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Jayne Louise Davies 30 November 2022

Good thinking David x Maybe they just want to rest? x

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