Heavy Thoughts? Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Heavy Thoughts?

Rating: 4.8


I bought a fancy talking scale;
I thought it was a wondrous thing.
It gives your poundage without fail;
it does everything but sing.

I went to weigh myself today
with my mind totally at ease.
My talking scale was heard to say:
No, no, no! One at a time, please!

Heavy Thoughts?
Friday, September 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: body,health,humor,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Belle Wassermeister 13 December 2022

That's what mine says to me, too! Great poem!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 28 September 2020

Dear Poet Kim Barney, I really enjoy the humour and the rhyme you bring into your poems. The fancy talking scale does talk much more than it should......... :) Full vote and stars

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Darwin Henry Beuning 09 August 2019

Kim, This poem has been out there awhile. It is great! ! I like the picture. Have added it to My Poem List! !

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Kim Barney 09 August 2019

Yes, it has been there a long time, almost five years. It is one of the first ones I ever posted here on Poem Hunter. Thanks, Hank, for the comment.

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Rajnish Manga 08 December 2015

Humour generated by this talking weighing machine is great. With its lovely rhyme the poem is immensely delectable. Thanks, Kim: No, no, no! One at a time, please!

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Kim Barney 09 August 2019

Thanks, Rajnish. I appreciate the comment.

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