Healthiest Town Ever Found Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

Healthiest Town Ever Found

Rating: 5.0


'I'm seeking somewhere to settle down, '
said the young man who was new in town.
'I am a man of substantial wealth,
and I want a place that's good for my health.'

'Then this is the place, ' said Buster Brown.
'There's no place healthier than this town.
When I arrived here, I could not talk,
and I was so weak, I couldn't walk.
I also had hardly any hair,
and had to be carried everywhere.'

The new man stared and stammered, 'Wow!
You certainly seem quite healthy now! '

'Yes, if I had to leave, I'd really mourn,
because this is the place where I was born! '

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This poem was entered in the 2022 Arizona State Poetry Society annual contest and took second place in the humor category. Earlier, this poem took First Place in the 2019 Utah State Poetry Society Spring Contest in Category 4: Betty Fowler Memorial. It is published on page 77 of the book Sandcutters 2022, published by the Arizona State Poetry Society.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hilarious! Loved the thinly veiled humour. Top and MyFavourites

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Unnikrishnan (may I just call you Unnik?) , thank you very much!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2022

My question is: Could you send the same poem to another State for submitting in the contest? Truly remarkable, Kim but wonderfully done your pun. My two thumbs up!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Part 2 of reply: Arizona publishes the poems that take first, second, and third place, so they can not be submitted again elsewhere with very few exceptions. There are a few contests that accept previously published poems.

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

It depends on the contest. Utah does not accept poems that have already won cash prizes, but Arizona does, if the poem has never been published. Utah does not publish their winning poems, so they can be entered in Arizona also.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 17 December 2022

In Utah State in 2019 won this cute humorous poem the First Place and................in 2022 in the Arizona State Poetry Society annual contest the second Place. Amazingly won, dear Kim.5 Stars!

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Dear Sylvia, thank you for your multiple comments.

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Darwin Henry Beuning 16 December 2022

Kim, Lovely poem.

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Kim Barney 20 December 2022

Thanks, Hank. You won a higher percentage of games than I did at chess club tonight!

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Savita Tyagi 15 December 2022

Great message delivered with humor. This is what today's young restless folks need to keep in mind!

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