the stationary hands arranged obliquely
in space, trying to hold the falling breath.
words, through porous fingers
clutching the web rolls down the faded red,
stays momentarily on the the pulsating vein.
she withdraw her hands
from a strange eye
as the evening moon
in all its might, evades
the red lament of sun.
great poem....descriptive style, hidden meaning..............u done great job carry on..
Very beautiful poem. Discriptive and breath taking. Very good write. (:
wow, breath taking narration. I can see the feeling behind this poem and a A dedicated heart of a poet. nice one. keep it up friend! God Bless you! ! ! ! !
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I would like to translate this poem
this is mystifying u got a seductive omniscient style all your own. keep writing and polishing it