***her Spirited Smile Poem by Ben Gieske

***her Spirited Smile

Rating: 3.5


(dedicated to Meggie Gultiano)

deep from within
arises from a flaming core
the fire of many suns

a fluorescent jewel
visible from afar
burning with desire

streaming outward
throughout the cosmos
springs a symphony

her voice resounding
a nightingale chorus
embraces a canyon of souls

her smile seeking
from galaxy to galaxy
to touch all in need

promising a pathway
to eternal joy
ever free

- September 24,2009

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Noel Horlanda 27 September 2009

nice piece dedicated to a very nice Lady of Poetry, I like every line all the way down but I love the following last lines most...her voice resounding a nightingale chorus, embraces a canyon of souls, her smile seeking from galaxy to galaxy to touch all in need, promising a pathway to eternal joy ever free. Last but the least...this piece fits her. She got that smile indeed. You're right, mate.10+

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What a glorious way to light Meggie's spirit and pure love she has for her friends on Poemhuner. I know she would particularly cherish 'streaming outward throughout the cosmos springs a symphony, her voice resounding a nightingale chorus embraces a canyon of souls' as she herself is a musician. God bless you for your kindness Ben in writing this wonderful Tribute. 10 love Karin

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Kesav Easwaran 26 September 2009

well written piece Ben...it's more than a tribute...Meggie richly deserves your praise..thanks...10.

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C. P. Sharma 26 September 2009

Very well deserved praise for the qualities of head and heartof the poetess and her poetic talents in equally praise worthy composition. CP

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Sandra Fowler 26 September 2009

An eloquent tribute to my beloved friend, Meggie. She is a lady of light at poemhunter.10 for both of you. Kind wishes, Sandra

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Ken E Hall 15 October 2009

A shining tribute thru a shining poem I'm sure her spirited smile will grow bigger with your poetic kindness uavanice1 regards

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Robert Howard 08 October 2009

A worth lyrical tribute to a lady of exceptional grace, imagination and kindness of heart.

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Catrina Heart 04 October 2009

This is such a beautiful poem of dedication to a beautiful and ever loving poetess Meggie. Great metaphorical lines for her florescent beauty and pearlescent charisma. Outstanding piece.............10+++++++++

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Irene Clark-hogg 03 October 2009

I am sure that anyone should be proud to have such a delightful piece of work dedicated to their name. You make the lady some-one all would wish as a friend. Your descriptive phrases are always a pleasure to read. Irene

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Seema Chowdhury 27 September 2009

this is such a nice and lovely poem.my tributes to Maggie too. i don't know her personally but through this poem i felt i could peep inside her for a while. thanks for shaqring this beautiful poem.

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