(dedicated to Meggie Gultiano)
deep from within
arises from a flaming core
the fire of many suns
a fluorescent jewel
visible from afar
burning with desire
streaming outward
throughout the cosmos
springs a symphony
her voice resounding
a nightingale chorus
embraces a canyon of souls
her smile seeking
from galaxy to galaxy
to touch all in need
promising a pathway
to eternal joy
ever free
- September 24,2009
Ben, a truly beautiful and well deserved tribute to Meggie. I am sure she will be delighted when she reads this compelling piece...I agree with Patti...another masterpiece from your talented pen
Beautiful tribute.I'm sure Meggie will be elated by your magical words..a ten and I linked your poem to Facebook..
Surprised to see and read this, that this poem is for me, Ben. What a loving and beautiful piece dedicated to me.Thank you so much Ben, from the bottom of my heart.for the time and talent you shared with me and your PH friends. This is rich in imagery, your words flow gently and lovingly like the wind that whispers softy in to my ears.I particularly love these lines of yours that really tells about me, the inner me. her smile seeking from galaxy to galaxy to touch all in need I am greatly honored and so blessed to have you as my friend. I deeply appreciate your words.Shalom! ! ! God bless you.. Hugs, Meggie
A beautiful dedication to Meggie, a remarkable verses for a lovely woman with a brilliant words to describe with...very nice.......10
A shining tribute thru a shining poem I'm sure her spirited smile will grow bigger with your poetic kindness uavanice1 regards
A worth lyrical tribute to a lady of exceptional grace, imagination and kindness of heart.
This is such a beautiful poem of dedication to a beautiful and ever loving poetess Meggie. Great metaphorical lines for her florescent beauty and pearlescent charisma. Outstanding piece.............10+++++++++
I am sure that anyone should be proud to have such a delightful piece of work dedicated to their name. You make the lady some-one all would wish as a friend. Your descriptive phrases are always a pleasure to read. Irene
this is such a nice and lovely poem.my tributes to Maggie too. i don't know her personally but through this poem i felt i could peep inside her for a while. thanks for shaqring this beautiful poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
There's a lot of beauty and compelling imagery in here. Great writing, as usual. (smile)