i want her tin skin. i want
her militant barbie breast,
resistant, cupped, no, cocked
in the V of her elbow. i want
my curves mountainous
and locked. i want her
arabesque eyes, i want her
tar markings, her curlicues,
i want her tin skin. she
is a tree, her hair a forest
of strength. i want to be
adorned with bottles. i
want my brownness
to cover all but the silver
edges of my tin skin. my
sculptor should have made
me like her round-bellied
maker hewed her: with chain-
saw in hand, roughly. cut
away from me everything
but the semblance of tender.
let nothing but my flexed
foot, toeing childhood, tell
the night-eyed, who know
how to look, what lies within.
A beautiful poem on shape nicely executed. Thanks and congratulation for being selected this poem as the poem of the day.
A great poem adoring womanhood and woman like desires to be in perfect and equally adorable shapes A well deserved modern poem of the day.
my sculptor should have made me like her round-bellied maker hewed her: with chain- saw in hand, roughly. cut away from me everything but the semblance of tender........../// beautiful poetic expression
What lies beneath is the true beauty Of a real woman not the physical aspects but inner beauty, Great poem by the poet
Evie, Good day. More poets and critics will be reading your poems. By the way, I enjoy a few of them already.
A nice poem on what woman likes to look with a perfect body. Thanks for sharing. Keep on dropping such beautiful poems.
A nice poem on what woman likes to look with a perfect body. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you Evie. Expressing our thoughts and feelings is incredible. I don’t know about you but I remember most situations when I wrote my poetry.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
another great womanhood writings- nice