Sunday, March 8, 2020

Herculean Oceans, Mounting The Saddle Of The Moon (6) Comments

Rating: 4.7

Herculean Oceans habitually bear
The weighty presence of their flowing might;
Soft winds coo them with fragrant lover's breath
Evoking ripples in the star drenched night,
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Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2020

At times mounting the saddle of the moon Riding out the tides as they yawn and stretch, Ever deeper they go in dark descent In the bonds of the elements they share. Nice lines. Much poetic. I most liked. A sea goer's poem. Elegantly evocative lyrics 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2020

Highly imaginative poem. The concluding four lines are much impressive and interesting. Beautiful presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 March 2020

yeah really beautiful imaginative writing; I enjoyed really

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George Krokos 08 March 2020

I enjoyed the imagery in this poem. Well done.

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Kostas Lagos 08 March 2020

The best way to begin my day is this oceanic masterpiece! Thanks Cap! I can almost smell the oceans' perfume

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