Herculean Oceans, Mounting The Saddle Of The Moon (6) Poem by Captain Cur

Herculean Oceans, Mounting The Saddle Of The Moon (6)

Rating: 4.7


Herculean Oceans habitually bear
The weighty presence of their flowing might;
Soft winds coo them with fragrant lover's breath
Evoking ripples in the star drenched night,
At times mounting the saddle of the moon
Riding out the tides as they yawn and stretch,
Ever deeper they go in dark descent
In the bonds of the elements they share.
Perhaps the dozing sun has to contend
With waiting flowers eager to enter
His well lit home, smiling breaks his rest
Slowly opening his circular door.
The wind is busy flirting, oceans brood
Accustomed to a life of solitude;
Bringing their secret thoughts to fruition,
Harnessing their strength, binds that contain them
Loosening, fluid bodies of the sea
Quietly hungering for things out there
In the green landscapes of imaginings,
To fill this world and all its vacant tendencies.

Sunday, March 8, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: flowers,moon,ocean,strength,sun,waves,wind
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 09 March 2020

At times mounting the saddle of the moon Riding out the tides as they yawn and stretch, Ever deeper they go in dark descent In the bonds of the elements they share. Nice lines. Much poetic. I most liked. A sea goer's poem. Elegantly evocative lyrics 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 March 2020

Highly imaginative poem. The concluding four lines are much impressive and interesting. Beautiful presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Mahtab Bangalee 08 March 2020

yeah really beautiful imaginative writing; I enjoyed really

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George Krokos 08 March 2020

I enjoyed the imagery in this poem. Well done.

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Kostas Lagos 08 March 2020

The best way to begin my day is this oceanic masterpiece! Thanks Cap! I can almost smell the oceans' perfume

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