Here Are My Eyes Poem by Renu Rakheja a.k.a Tranquil Ocean

That is such an impressive piece of writing. Your words are so graceful. ~Linley~

This is beautiful :) P

Very nice, reminds me of some of my own work, although I thought the ending might be stronger.

Most innovative work, T.O..not to mention impassionately seductive, but in a very tasteful style...The Readers love it, PH loves it...me? I love it, and it rightfully belongs at its current elite status...Congrats & kudos on you, my dear! Frank

this is lovely, tranquil.

Grand write. Thoughts are evolving through profound ocean of wisdom and love. Go ahead.

I love this poem and it is very beautiful keep up the work

unique style..vibrant words...well written

My Response TO: Here Are My Eyes He felt some radiance, as he drowned her deer like eyes in his; He sensed her lustrous passion, when obscured her lips by his! He caressed the warmth of fleece; as her skin dissolved in his, He softened his robust heart, when it was time to reunite with hers! That was all a dream – unreal. What a dream, that was! ? ! He cherished his blemished dreams, as she saturates them in hers; He nurtured his failing hopes, to realize them together with hers! He sapped the going strength of his thoughts, to encourage hers; He awaited her soul to enlighten and affect her power over his! He brought his incensed soul to fore; to gratify her mounting soar He tormented a damned life and wished for a final hatred from her!

Wow...ur a master in using the right words...keep it up...