Here Goes A Beggar Boy Poem by Aniruddha Pathak

Here Goes A Beggar Boy

Rating: 5.0


When I came to this world,
Born was I a free bird—
Worry was there nor yet a let,
Easy were my needs met.

On my wish world to greet
God gave me eyes and feet,
‘Pon my wish, world to hear
A pair of ears that I do hear.

And hungry I hardly went—
Mother's milk enough He sent;
Variety of food He sent with,
I grew when pearly white set of teeth.

But as I grew, I learnt to nag,
Whatso ere was my bare need
Which, greater grew now unto greed,
My prayers were alibis to beg.

My fond wishes turned to wants,
Wants grew as wanton weeds,
Dreams, into den of daunting haunts—
And unto penitent mind's pleads.

Sent here to celebrate blissful joy,
Look here goes a mere beggar boy!
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Reflections | 09.09.07 |

Tuesday, June 11, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: greed
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A new born babe has only basic needs, which God meets fully and without asking. But as she grows old the needs turn into wants, and then yearnings and desires like wanton weeds. Man's prayers become pleads, his needs are now bordering on greed and he becomes a beggar boy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 12 June 2019

A great analysis of transformation of an innocent kid with minimum needs into a greedy beggar boy due to inherent foes like greed, , envy, anger etc gifted by God beautifully done. Thanks for sharing.10 points. Regards.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Thank you Ratnakar Mandlik for visiting my poem and appreciating it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 June 2019

This is really a beautiful poem on greed and beggar having impressive expression with broad outlook. I love the most lines are....And hungry I hardly went— Mother's milk enough He sent; Variety of food He sent with, I grew when pearly white set of teeth TFS.10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Yes Kumarmani Mahakul these lines seem to stand out as compared to others. Thanks for your evaluation.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 June 2019

A wonderful and perceptive poem, Sir. A great observation on human character. Man's desires will never cease. There is no contentment in life. A unique write to convey wisdom. Masterfully written.

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

Thank you Rose Marie for your appreciation

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 June 2019

Greed is the greatest enemy of a man...the contented man is the happiest man on the earth! Simply one needs to control his/her desire to the extent possible! An insightful piece of work sir....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 June 2019

I agree with you, Dr swain and thanks for visiting my poem.

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