Hesitation Poem by merna ibrahim

Hesitation

Rating: 5.0


This feeling really provokes me,
because it erases the sanity&the glee.

It makes your thoughts in a strong conflict, as the harsh sea waves.
And the hesitation make you so numb, so, you don't know how to behave.
And the other thoughts come out from their caves.
But finally, you are obliged to decide, and send the other options to the grave.

In certain situations, you feel hesitated
and when you can't decide you feel frustrated.
It needs a great confidence to defeat this feeling,
But if you became decisive, you would be good at dealing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lady Grace 16 June 2009

this poem is expressive..don't hesitate to display your talent..grace

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Pushkar Bisht 16 June 2009

Great work! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thanks Pushkar

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Afzal Shauq 16 June 2009

it's really a good poem expressing reality with explanation of some psychological and moral characteristics in human's life... I enjoyed it much and also appreciate Merna Ibrahim for this much sweet poem...and hope she will add more poems too on regulaer bases... she got 10 +++++++++ points for this poem.... I love this stnza of her poem In certain situations, you feel hesitated and when you can't decide you feel frustrated. It needs a great confidence to defeat this feeling, But if you became decisive, you would be good at dealing

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Kesav Easwaran 16 June 2009

Good work Merna...poignant words...gives a good message...confidence is a must to deal with situations in life...thanks...10

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 16 June 2009

Confidence oozing from your poem Merna! .........................a good write...............

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 09 November 2009

a good analysis of HESITATION! a Right&Meaningful done! a CERTAIN 10 to defeat the HESITATION/

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Cecilia Nicoletti 11 October 2009

THOUGHTFUL POEM - NICE WRITING FOR SUCH YOUNG POET- GO ON.

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p.a. noushad 31 July 2009

the life has certain meaning, it will reveal before us, must have confidence ever, i like your poem.

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Jaleel Perinjanam 30 June 2009

Yes Merna... the hesitation... a dilemma all over, specifically in teens. Frustration defeated by significant influence until you agree for the deal… good write.. keep it up -Jaleel

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Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

it is awesome write...penned with skills

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