Ask no more the distance from dew to grass
Nor the way leading twilight to moonlight
When i begin searching for you
My morning chases your night
when you start talking to me
Your sun kisses my stars goodnight
Your sun is kissing my stars goodnight //Ι can not find out the syntactical position and function of the wors ''goodnight'' here..It sound though quite nice.
morning chases the night. sun kissing the stars........ wonderful imagination. you are romantic. dev
Oh! What a beautiful concept; what an exquisite piece of poetry! Loved reading. Congrats!
dear Anne, you're a talented poet.. I like your poetry very much This poem, short but brightly penned, is a little gem. Only one thing, maybe.. May I suggest just a little change? '' Ask no more the distance from dew to grass Nor the way leading twilight to moonlight When i begin searching for you My morning chases your night when you start talking to me Your sun kisses my stars goodnight ''
My morning is chasing your night - beautiful. I liked this line.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
That is nice., I read it once, I read twice, I read it thrice, and it was still nice. O. P.