Tying a ribbon on my eyes
you whispered find me where I hide
and left me stand alone
pale and blue.....
with few steps I walked aside
my arms searching where you hide
but you do know
soon I will find you......
from a distance I heard a noise
I know its you giving a clue
with smile and full of love
I walked to you.....
when I unfasten the knot on my eyes
I saw you kneeling with raised flowers
uttering the words which gives me life
I LOVE YOU......
wow...very sweet.. lovely and romantic a write that can make one smile and feel the love in it... lovely lovely write... a love just felt though not seeing.... and finally find her kneeling and saying 'i love you...? ' You mean she..on her feet...? wow...its unique... hahahaahaha...sweet and amusing...idea is so great... 10++++++
WOW...WOW.. soooooo romantic game for lovers. 'm imagining the words lol , , , its like a movie... hahha good one..
much plainly said true feelings........love unfolding the much beauty of life.......! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
with smile and full of love I walked to you..... Rachel Ann Butler