Under the dim candle light
with my diary clutched tight
your fingers ran on my poetic lines
and you started reading the secret of my mind
I saw your lips uttering my poem lines
and for the first time I felt myself so fine
your crazy to know for whom these poems are
reading it am sure you got.. how much love I had for you this far
I had been awaiting this day for years long
atleast today you happened to see my love for you
with smile I went to bed with joy filled heart
cos I felt atlast you got my love song
with smile I opened my eyes thinking your at my side
seeing no one beside just jolted up from bed
closing my eyes..said myself its a dream again
with no more words to say, I just looked at my diary pages with pain
thinking sure one day you will come in my life...to read it again....
u have choosen just the PERFECT words.. ur composition has shown so much of patience n gratitude.. nicely written..thanx 4 sharing this..
a beautiful compostion----- i loveeeeee ittttttt! ! ! ! ! regards anjali
wonderful poem But i like this line most: your fingers ran on my poetic lines
your fingers ran on my poetic lines and you started reading the secret of my mind Rachel Ann Butler
sebastine ur poems r very beautifully pen-down indeed......keep writing n writing don stop...................u hav di real magic in u............2 xpress
you have a crative sense of mind and i like how youre telling a story.a very passionate and heartfelt poem.
uhum, , , ok, , , now i know, ur diary hve many pages..so, careful to dsplay mght i cud see parrot trained by u, or birthmarks or whatever, lols... my comments goes ths way..: ths poem s so gud, still searching for a gud reader to read ur mind..lols hpe ull end with a very pretty reader to fit ur choice, , and am sure u eat lots of peanut, , why? others says..peanuts make brains active alwaz..so, its shows n ur poem how creative ur concsious mind..my gosh, , , i reli like ths piece.. gud luck engineer..thousands of salutes for u....but alwaz keep ur diary n a sfe place..hehehhehehe
...........a lovely, yearning for a long loved one..passionate in its theme....expression of deep feelings f
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I would like to translate this poem
u have choosen just the PERFECT words.. ur composition has shown so much of patience n gratitude.. nicely written..thanx 4 sharing this..