Am Still Waiting You, To Read My Mind.... Poem by Sebastine Humaemo
Am Still Waiting You, To Read My Mind....
Under the dim candle light
with my diary clutched tight
your fingers ran on my poetic lines
and you started reading the secret of my mind
I saw your lips uttering my poem lines
and for the first time I felt myself so fine
your crazy to know for whom these poems are
reading it am sure you got.. how much love I had for you this far
I had been awaiting this day for years long
atleast today you happened to see my love for you
with smile I went to bed with joy filled heart
cos I felt atlast you got my love song
with smile I opened my eyes thinking your at my side
seeing no one beside just jolted up from bed
closing my eyes..said myself its a dream again
with no more words to say, I just looked at my diary pages with pain
thinking sure one day you will come in my life...to read it again....
u have choosen just the PERFECT words.. ur composition has shown so much of patience n gratitude.. nicely written..thanx 4 sharing this..
a beautiful compostion----- i loveeeeee ittttttt! ! ! ! ! regards anjali
wonderful poem But i like this line most: your fingers ran on my poetic lines
your fingers ran on my poetic lines and you started reading the secret of my mind Rachel Ann Butler
sebastine ur poems r very beautifully pen-down indeed......keep writing n writing don stop...................u hav di real magic in u............2 xpress
you have a crative sense of mind and i like how youre telling a story.a very passionate and heartfelt poem.
uhum, , , ok, , , now i know, ur diary hve many pages..so, careful to dsplay mght i cud see parrot trained by u, or birthmarks or whatever, lols... my comments goes ths way..: ths poem s so gud, still searching for a gud reader to read ur mind..lols hpe ull end with a very pretty reader to fit ur choice, , and am sure u eat lots of peanut, , why? others says..peanuts make brains active alwaz..so, its shows n ur poem how creative ur concsious mind..my gosh, , , i reli like ths piece.. gud luck engineer..thousands of salutes for u....but alwaz keep ur diary n a sfe place..hehehhehehe
...........a lovely, yearning for a long loved one..passionate in its theme....expression of deep feelings f
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u have choosen just the PERFECT words.. ur composition has shown so much of patience n gratitude.. nicely written..thanx 4 sharing this..