Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 63,158 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Highly Recommended - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

When a trust in another,
Has been replaced...
By a game of sneak to hide...
To run away from to escape.
It is safe to say,
This kind of relationship...
Is not one that will foster,
A peace of mind...
That encourages,
A physical or healthy mental outlook.

It would be highly recommended,
That anyone in this situation...
Find it necessary to pack all their things,
And leave...
Immediately!
Don't even compose a note,
Signed...Anonymous.
Or make the fact that your absence,
Will be missed.
Consider this a door meant to close and cement.


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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 10, 2010



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