His eye's hold yet a deep brown. But,
in everyday life, he feels like he drowns.
He glances at her without a sound, though
his heart longs to place on her head, a
golden crown.
Her eye's are blue, her hair is long. Two
worlds away but, both their hearts play the
same love song.
Each night she write's about him with feelings
so strong. As time moves on, he looks to her,
she looks to him. Each night they pass in the
hall, their hands barely touch, no words at all.
Hearts lock...
As he thinks, God I love her.
And she thinks, God I love him.
FIVE: TOP Marks,5 Stars Full and ToMyFavourites. TFS, dear Becca! I have enjoyed the innocence from both: from him and from her. Beautiful Love poem
FOURTH: a beautiful poem about true love, i applaud this! Absolute beautifully introvertedly worded,
THREE: they feel each other's tension and finally they sing the same love song:
A true romantic gem! Brilliantly expressed young love! Thank you for sharing this poem!
Such a lovely, enchanting poem! A pleasure to read. So well written and unforgettably tender and sweet.
Loved the closure lines. So powerful that they touch right through your heart and soul.
A wonderful depiction of pure love. A love consummated in accordance with their great faith in God. Beautiful love story so uniquely expressed.
A one of a kind love story so deeply touching. Sometimes we an never understand the wonders of love.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Superb piece.... delightful to read...thank u...