Him/Her Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Him/Her

Rating: 5.0

His eye's hold yet a deep brown. But,
in everyday life, he feels like he drowns.
He glances at her without a sound, though
his heart longs to place on her head, a
golden crown.
Her eye's are blue, her hair is long. Two
worlds away but, both their hearts play the
same love song.
Each night she write's about him with feelings
so strong. As time moves on, he looks to her,
she looks to him. Each night they pass in the
hall, their hands barely touch, no words at all.
Hearts lock...
As he thinks, God I love her.
And she thinks, God I love him.

Saturday, July 29, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjandev Roy 30 July 2023

Superb piece.... delightful to read...thank u...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 30 July 2023

Wonderful share Rebecca enjoyed it very much TFS

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2023

FIVE: TOP Marks,5 Stars Full and ToMyFavourites. TFS, dear Becca! I have enjoyed the innocence from both: from him and from her. Beautiful Love poem

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2023

FOURTH: a beautiful poem about true love, i applaud this! Absolute beautifully introvertedly worded,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 29 July 2023

THREE: they feel each other's tension and finally they sing the same love song:

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Timber Koleden 25 August 2025

A true romantic gem! Brilliantly expressed young love! Thank you for sharing this poem!

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Sandra Feldman 05 August 2023

Such a lovely, enchanting poem! A pleasure to read. So well written and unforgettably tender and sweet.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2023

Loved the closure lines. So powerful that they touch right through your heart and soul.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2023

A wonderful depiction of pure love. A love consummated in accordance with their great faith in God. Beautiful love story so uniquely expressed.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 August 2023

A one of a kind love story so deeply touching. Sometimes we an never understand the wonders of love.

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