बाल गीत / सब्जी लेने गए थे लल्ला (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

बाल गीत / सब्जी लेने गए थे लल्ला (Hindi)

Rating: 5.0

सब्जी लेने गए थे लल्ला
साथ ले गए बल्ला
सब्जी ले कर ध्यान ये आया
साथ न लाये गल्ला (गल्ला = cash)

लौट के आये लल्ला जी तो
खाली देख के पल्ला
माँ ने कहा निठल्ला है तू
मचा जोर का हल्ला

लल्ला को भी जोश आ गया
घुमा के बोले बल्ला
लाखों रूपए कमाऊंगा माँ
मत कह मुझे निठल्ला

Friday, July 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: baby,market,money,mother and child ,rhyme,song,vegetable
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 July 2017

लाखों रूपए कमाऊंगा माँ मत कह मुझे निठल्ला... a best hope in a little child. Saying on love and affection of a mother makes a child great. A poem with great imaginary has been painted here so nicely. Thank you dear Mangaji for posting this lovely poem in hindi.

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Rajnish Manga 19 July 2017

So nice of you to have liked this children's poem. It hints at the substantial earnings made by cricketers these days. Thanks for your kind words, Kumarmani ji.

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Superb poem that rhymes beautifully लल्ला, बल्ला, गल्ला, पल्ला, निठल्ला, हल्ला A play of words most rhythmically phrased. 100+++

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Rajnish Manga 16 July 2017

I am glad you liked this children's poem. Thanks a lot, Geeta ji.

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Upendra Upm 14 July 2017

superb poem.fullmark- - +10

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Rajnish Manga 14 July 2017

Thanks for your appreciative comments on this poem, Dear Upendra ji.

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