मंझधार में अटकी है मौला (Hindi) Poem by Rajnish Manga

मंझधार में अटकी है मौला (Hindi)

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मंझधार में अटकी है मौला, मेरी कश्ती पार लगा देना
हम अपना ज़ोर लगा बैठे, तुम अपना ज़ोर दिखा देना
बचपन से हमने ये ही सुना, हिम्मते मरदां मददे ख़ुदा
कोशिश को हमारी बल देना, बन्दों का कष्ट मिटा देना

मंझधार में अटकी है मौला (Hindi)
Sunday, November 8, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: boat,goal,god,storm,strength
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jagdish Singh Ramána 23 March 2019

what a beauty of Hindustani language has! Kya khoob! I loved to read this beautiful poem. Sir, please give your view about my new poems: 'resurrection of donne' and 'my lilac tree'.

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Rajnish Manga 24 March 2019

Thanks for your kind words of appreciation. I'd surely like to read your poems.

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Ajay Kumar Adarsh 16 August 2016

बहुत खूब सर आपके लिखनी में बेहद जादू है!

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Akhtar Jawad 10 August 2016

Bahut Khoob, sirf Hindi hi nahin aap Urdu mein bhi lajawab hayn.

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M Asim Nehal 09 November 2015

Bahut badiya...Aameen, Kya baat hai aapki dua'a padhkar 2 lines dil mein aagayi Hum sab teri rehmat ke mohtaaj hain apna karam kar dena, Bande hain tere hum sab hi, aapas ke gireh mita dena...............

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Rajnish Manga 09 November 2015

Thank you very much, Md. Asim ji, for your words of appreciation and for your value addition to the poem with a brilliant couplet.

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