His Kiss Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

His Kiss

Rating: ★4.9


The dew of the dawn,
Touches my cheek and
Slides to my lips.
Oh how cold, how cold!
It is like the swift kiss,
Of the man who broke
His vow to me.

Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

Thursday, February 3, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: kiss,lips,rights,rose
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 04 February 2022

A poem so painfully and delicately concieved it flow right into our hearts, so strongly and unforgettably. A very sad but beautiful work.

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Sandra Feldman 04 February 2022

Your deep, deep pain, reflected by tears akin to morning dew so poetically conceived, increase the flow of the pain of betrayle

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2022

1) How nature controls our thoughts is again evident from this excellent poem, whether you like it or not, a little event leads us to moments tragic or happy,

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 03 February 2022

He's not worthy for yr love

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Like the swift kiss of the man who broke his vow. Fantastic

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Soran M. H 21 September 2026

Here, the accomplished poetess's use of nature as a metaphor to express her feelings and pain becomes evident. Well done.

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Soran M. H 21 September 2026

The way the dew touches and slides away bears a lovely, exquisite resemblance to a fleeting kiss; both share a quality of transience—the dew through evaporation, and the man through his failure to keep his vow. A delicate, tender, and refined piece of writing.

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Rob Lamberton 16 October 2024

Chilling!

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PREMKUMAR C N 20 April 2023

Strikingly brilliant depiction of the deception. Love is just a chemical reaction. Only when we realize the true human nature we will be content with life.

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Anjandev Roy 21 February 2023

Excellent and impeccable piece.....as always.....

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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