His Kiss Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

His Kiss

Rating: 4.9


The dew of the dawn,
Touches my cheek and
Slides to my lips.
Oh how cold, how cold!
It is like the swift kiss,
Of the man who broke
His vow to me.

Copyright 2022, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Feldman 04 February 2022

Your deep, deep pain, reflected by tears akin to morning dew so poetically conceived, increase the flow of the pain of betrayle

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Sandra Feldman 04 February 2022

A poem so painfully and delicately concieved it flow right into our hearts, so strongly and unforgettably. A very sad but beautiful work.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2022

1) How nature controls our thoughts is again evident from this excellent poem, whether you like it or not, a little event leads us to moments tragic or happy,

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2022

2) it's how our mood is at that moment, your beautiful poem about this event, I still remember, but what I appreciate most in you, you have kept your self-esteem. I got very sad, but that wasn't true love, certainly not.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 03 February 2022

This magnificent poem touches my heart deeply..5 Stars full on Top.

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Richard Wlodarski 18 March 2022

Deeply felt grief so touchingly expressed in succinct verse. And what a great analogy!

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Kevin Patrick 17 March 2022

Nature can be calming but callous, just like the betrayal of a lover who betrays ones trust. These words transcend into feelings we have all felt.

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Rebecca Navarre 09 March 2022

Powerfully painted imagery that goes straight to the heart! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 March 2022

Beautiful poetry. Heart touching. Loved it.

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Susan Williams 20 February 2022

you nailed the heartache and betrayal of loving a man who is a cheater -always has been, always will be, the cheating man has a cold heart, he can ape the words of a lover but they are just memorized lines--so well written, my dear, top score and faved

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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