The dew of the dawn,
Touches my cheek and
Slides to my lips.
Oh how cold, how cold!
It is like the swift kiss,
Of the man who broke
His vow to me.
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Your deep, deep pain, reflected by tears akin to morning dew so poetically conceived, increase the flow of the pain of betrayle
1) How nature controls our thoughts is again evident from this excellent poem, whether you like it or not, a little event leads us to moments tragic or happy,
Like the swift kiss of the man who broke his vow. Fantastic
Strikingly brilliant depiction of the deception. Love is just a chemical reaction. Only when we realize the true human nature we will be content with life.
Deeply felt grief so touchingly expressed in succinct verse. And what a great analogy!
Nature can be calming but callous, just like the betrayal of a lover who betrays ones trust. These words transcend into feelings we have all felt.
Powerfully painted imagery that goes straight to the heart! .. Excellently expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++
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A poem so painfully and delicately concieved it flow right into our hearts, so strongly and unforgettably. A very sad but beautiful work.